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Goliath and Elisa 2013a

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HP
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Photosmart 5520 series
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

O.k, how do I start? O.k, I really like the wings. The way you shaded them to curve that way. I also like the way that you highlited the woman's cheekbone. Her pose seems a bit forced as well as relaxed. Maybe her right arm should bea but lower perhaps? Take a look at Goliath's feet, I think they're kind of off. I like the expression on both of them. I hope this crtitique wasn't too harsh. I gave you 5 stars on your strong points and 4 on your weak points. Over all, I think it's very nice. K, rock on. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>