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OblivionOblivion I can taste the sadnessIn each and every dayIt tears me up inside I can feel my mind wanderTo the wrong placesAnd the wrong times Do I deserve to feelThis way all my life?Is this my future plan? Yet my minds still goesTo places forbiddenAnd I will feel the tears Nothing can break thisWall I placed myself withinI belong in this oblivion I can feel the tortureOf my own mind chiding meLeading me to nowhere
think back (day 1)remember me whenyour mind explodes with dark soundsbreaking like the waves
Control of NothingControl of Nothing Wasting here- torn in twoWatching a clockI wait for youWandering deeplywithin my soulTrying to find peace-A search for controlControl of my lifeControl of my pastControl of my future-Is it going to last?Wondering in fearHiding in shameNobody but meis here to blame.Tear out my heartPour out this sinTake it awayBefore it beginsThere is no control- don’t be a foolThe controlis an illusion andwe all make our ownIllusions to holdDeep in our dreamsIllusions to keepwhere no one can seeHide them awayand wait for a dayWhen they canrelease into awake-less sleep.
HimHimHis breath is like streamsOf sun bursting forthHis eyes are a glimmerOf aurora borealis northHis hair is of windsweptSilver and coalHis words are of centuriesFilled with new and oldHe is all and nothingWhatever coaxed nearHe is your mysteryA lover with no fear